This week's Red Writing Hood challenge gives us 450 words to explore in fiction or creative non-fiction, any meaning of the word Core:
core
noun
1 the earth’s core: center, interior, middle, nucleus; recesses, bowels, depths; informal innards; literary midst.
2 the core of the argument: heart, heart of the matter, nucleus, nub, kernel, marrow, meat, essence, quintessence, crux, gist, pith, substance, basis, fundamentals; informal nitty-gritty, brass tacks, nuts and bolts.
adjective
the core issue: central, key, basic, fundamental, principal, primary, main, chief, crucial, vital, essential; informal number-one. ANTONYMS peripheral.
For this prompt, I felt compelled to return to my main character from last week's challenge titled Fairytale Ended. I wanted to give Tracy a little closure.
I offer the following in response: A Poisoned Apple
Morning sunlight filtered through the trees, casting
lacey shadows on the earth, as Tracy reached her intended destination. The secluded
orchard aged quietly, nestled in the hollow; a labyrinthine haven from the ills
of life. As a child, she scampered about the uniform apple trees like a sprite
among sentinels, unaware of passing time. These trees had a way of leeching
troubles from her soul.
She brought Kevin here last summer to share with him
her most treasured patch of sacred ground. Blinded by passion, she failed to
notice the warning signs. Marry me.
It wasn’t a question. Kevin commanded her heart like a master puppeteer,
twisting the strings to his own ends. She shut her eyes tight as if to drown
his betrayal in darkness. She wanted to see her beloved apple trees cleansed of
his taint.
“Tracy,” exclaimed an earthy, familiar voice. “Never
expected to see you again after you brought that feller around.”
“You know I can’t stay away from this place for
long, Appleginny,” she replied, opening her eyes eagerly. Ginny was older than
Tracy remembered, shriveled like an apple-doll baked by the sun. The woman was
the wizened recluse that every mountain community told tall tales of. Locals
called her the Apple Whisperer or
sometimes Ginny Appleseed but never
with malice. The superstitious still believed in hexes.
Dark eyes narrowed. “He stripped some innocence from
you, didn’t he?” Ginny soothsaid finally, hobbling closer. “I knowed that boy
had Watercore through to the peel the moment I met him. These apples have it too,
sadly. One rotten apple, maybe he spoiled the bunch.”
“Watercore?”
Appleginny reached up with her cane, skillfully knocking
a Braeburn into her practiced hand. “Looks flawless from the outside, eh?” She
pulled the Swiss Army styled garden tool from her belt and halved the apple
with its blade. Glassy white flesh was scarred by a brown sunburst at its epicenter.
“But the inside…”
“But the inside…” Tracy repeated, the painful
recollection of her ruined wedding bubbling to the surface.
“Severely deficient,” the woman smiled wryly. “Not
that it’s a lost cause for eatin’, mind, just an acquired taste. Oft makes them
alkyholic tastin’. Some folks’ll even covet them, callin’ them Honeyed Apples.
I’ll use them for applejack, not much else.”
“Is there a cure?” Tracy asked, hopefully.
“Watercore‘s brought about by too much nitrogen
poisoning the soil. Suffocates the fruit. Easy fix for next year’s crop with a
bit of time, sweat and good fertilizer.” Her smile faded. “In humans, though,
the cure’s not as straightforward. Best you leave that feller for thems what
has a taste for it, eh?” She tossed the halves unceremoniously to the ground. “Scavengers
need food too.”
I really like how her passion with applesis a theme. The beginning paragraphs settles me in for her unique character.
ReplyDeleteI love your writing
Thanks! I loved the idea of Appleginny. I think all small towns have someone like her or have stories of someone like her. And thanks for the love!
DeleteWhat a beautiful way of teaching a lesson, or maybe reiterating a lesson already painfully learnt in the school of hardknocks. I love your descriptions of the orchard and its effects on the soul, a magical place indeed. But Tracy or Tracey? :)
ReplyDeleteOops! Good catch! I guess I shouldn't work on things at 2am eh? :)
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Oh, I LOVE this! Nice job with the layering of fairy tale, contemporary heartache and agriculture. So well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the love! I'm thrilled this worked so well. As always, thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!
DeleteI agree entirely with the other comments expressing how creative and effective Appleginny was as a character. Anything folklore-esque instantly intrigues me. I also love orchards as a setting, so this caught me immediately.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback. Appleginny was a fun write. Thanks again for stopping by!
DeleteI'm glad you continued that story. The parallels you drew were beautifully done - straight forward but shown, not told.
ReplyDeleteI'm thrilled this protag and her situation work for you. I have to get her some happy times soon. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!
DeleteAppleginny is a fantastic character. I like the way she easily weaves Tracy's heartache into a lesson taught by the apples, both offering comfort and letting Tracy know that some people just aren't compatible.
ReplyDeleteAppleginny was so fun to write, I'm thrilled that she worked. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
DeleteWhimsical yet poignant. Enjoyed the flow of your writing. The details of the orchard were wonderfully done.
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Deletethis was beautifully done, and so detailed. I could hear some familiarity in the main character's nickname, a form of what others call Ginny. And I could see her take the tool and cut the apple open, and feel your character's understanding dawning with Ginny's explanation. Pain. Really good writing!!
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DeleteNicely done! As with everyone else, I'm loving Ginny. A magical personality at the very least.
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DeleteThe character of Ginny is very well done--personable, mysterious, and obviously quite wise. Were you going for an archetypal character?
ReplyDeleteYup that's what I was going for.I'm thriled you enjoyed her. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
DeleteFolk wisdom and wise (a white woman of the Appalachians?) women are a great backdrop, and I love Appleginny. She's magic. The last gesture, tossing the halved apple to the ground? Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks! Appalachia has always been a draw for me. I love the culture and the tales and the music. Ginny wqs truly a joy to write. Thanks for stoping by and sharing your thoughts!
DeleteSeems like we both decided to conitnue our thoughts from last week.
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy stories that have quirky characters which is exactly how I would decribe Appleginny. Her critism of the fiance and her watercore explanation were genius.
So glad to have the opportunity to read your writings. Great job!
Quirky is an excellent word, and it fits. Thank you folr stopping by and sharing your thoughts. You are always welcome here.
DeleteLovely post. The first paragraph is exquisite. I also like that you incorporated Appleginny's linguistic quirks without being distracting.
ReplyDeleteOne bit of concrit in the first sentence--the words, "intended destination" pull me out of the building image of the orchard.
The conclusion was spot on--drop him and don't look back!
Thank for letting me know what worked and what didn't. I appreciate it. I'm thrilled you stopped by and shared your thoughts!
DeleteI really loved this piece. The Appleginny character is new to me and I found her absolutely fascinating. Well done!
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DeleteThis is lovely, sad but lovely and very well written. Good job
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